Ying-yong's Reviews

[Pico's space adventure]

very peaceful

what you lacked in the animation department you certainly made up for in the mood, color scheme, design, and music. Specifically what Burial song was this? Excellent work.

Rutger responds:

thanks dude. The song I used was In McDonalds

[art in the playground]

very well done

This is very much like Creature Comforts : interviewing and getting the responses about what the 'little guy' thinks.

These kids were, suprisingly, not annoying and were funny in most cases. They put a very tiny amount of thought into what they were saying, but at least they took you seriously.

Just a question : are you going back there to show this to them?

tommylm responds:

hopefully this will be shown to the entire school at the end of the year.
i did over 10 minutes of interviewing and these turned out to be the best lines, had to cut a lot of kids out so... i hope they aren't upset

[GhostFight-BOS-Part1]

Astounding

Friends, you may never see another work just like this one.

Seeing it normally, it has very cool light effects that would warrant a ten on it's own, a very smooth frame rate and a keen eye for detail. It would be a near flawless stickfight.

However, you MUST use the 1234 keys, the arrow keys, and the mouse to fully enjoy the movie. It's like you're being the director for some kickass action movie. By doing this, you get to see little details left behind from the birds-eye view.

[3d Dragon Test]

Alright

Kind of useless since there's no game to go with the graphic. At least the dragon looked nice. the only thing you could have done to make the test even better is to put a background of...something fantasy-like instead of space. Maybe you could make some game with a scrolling screen, and you have to avoid enemies. If you've ever played one of those scrolling levels on Yoshi's Island, you know what I'm talking about.

A good underdog of the week.

[Newgrounds Pass]

Fine game.

For those stuck on 21, the password is that there is no password.

The ending could have been better, and I wish that clicking out of the password box could be easier, because half of the time when I was typing, I had no idea that with each new letter it was erasing the last one.

But this is a good find, but once you beat it, you have no reason to play again.

[how to make a game!]

Not bad.

There was a lot of helpful hints to the flash. I bet a lot of people will make new, quality games from this movie! :D However, I thought you could have gone a bit deeper into sidescrolling, other moves of the person, and enemies.

Other than that it was fine.

ELFERRETO responds:

yeah, i am learning about enemies now, once i finish my game i will make the best tutorial ever to be posted on NG MWA HAHAHAHAHAHA, and hopefully itll get another award

[Da Napolean Dynamite Song-BETA]

Eh.....um...

I agree with you, NAPOLEON DYNAMITE ROCKS!

Just that, you don't sing that well......

At least you have some guitaring skills! ;)

[Oro N' API - Density]

AWESOME!!!!

This is the perfect credit song! I will use this, and a gold record!

[Snail Mannnn]

Great work.

I love the contrast of the orange on the green/blue, along with the design of the creature in the middle. However, the green/blue "waves" beside him are messy; they're clunky and don't really go anywhere, and you could use something in the eyes of the monster, they look unfinished.

BUT this isn't half bad and I'm still glad I scouted you. Looking forward to more.

[amelie]

stunning

words cannot describe my love for this piece.

Not only is this masterfully illustrated, but the intricate details of the colors & little monsters hiding here and there are things many would not think of. Bravo!

[monster fighter main group]

wow

Aside from the fact that this is a blurry .jpg, you didn't draw the background, the characters are uninspired, and their features are horrifically out of tune. For example, "Rocky"'s arm looks like there is a malignant tumor growing from it. Muscles don't work that way.

Suggestions: Draw real people before you go off an draw very stylized. You've got to follow the rules first before you break them.